Sunday, January 31, 2010
New Yorker Review
What Happened To Lani Garver by Carol Plum-Ucci, is an interesting book about a new kid to Hackett island and his effect on the some of the people on it. In the story he gets close to the protagonist, Claire, and helps get out when she’s in need. They form a close bond, which is resented by the rest of Claire’s friends who think that Lani is bad news. This causes much well described and interesting conflict, which is a big joy to read. Her descriptions throughout the story are powerful and give greater pictures than one could imagine. The plot is edgy and keeps you on the edge of your seat, making you crave for more even while you read.
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Brian -- Ideas are fine, but the articulation is bumpy. For instance, some pronouns aren't specified "he gets..." "her descriptions" and the use of 2nd person at the end feels out of place. The bit about well described and interesting conflict is great, but the "give greater pictures" part reads awkwardly. This is on the right track but needs some editing.
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